To Feel

Let these words
pass along on the softness…
of your lips,
each caress…
a heart…
touched upon your fingertips.
Let these visions
be it all seen, through your eyes,
and when it is all clear…
enough to hear…
let it leave you breathless…
in its gentle sighs.
When it all seems to fade,
let it remain…
felt…
just as it has… always… been there
…feel it…
scattering over you…
with the falling rain…
because each element…
is as true
as me
as you.

This post is for OneShot Wednesday at OneStopPoetry  an amazing group of poets, writers, and artists, who are wonderful friends with such talents. A place you definitely you need to explore. I guess this will (now…) be my last post for a while, as I’m leaving on the 22nd. They will be missed. Much love, gratitude for all. In hopes to get back online soon!

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About betweenhearts75

Poetry writer, artist, mother, daughter, and friend. Weaving words from the heart, the imagination is the art!
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14 Responses to To Feel

  1. Donna says:

    wonderful words. Once again, I can feel the emotion coming through. This one gave me goose bumps.

  2. brian says:

    travel light…and look forward to your return…love the tender intimacy of your verse..and hope it is always true for you…

  3. Beautiful poem filled with magical emotion and the depth of a long term love affair.

  4. leah says:

    Video and a poem. Nice ,enjoyed both

  5. Sweet One I pray you find the mending you need for the tenderest of hearts that in these poems I’ve seen. Blessings to You!

  6. slpmartin says:

    Beautiful words….and lovely emotions expressed.

  7. claudia says:

    When it all seems to fade,
    let it remain…
    felt…
    yes – much truth in this and beautiful lines

  8. Exquisite journey in gentleness of feeling and memory. Like a gauze blanket, seeing colors through, feeling only being and love. Thanks!

  9. Andy says:

    WoW! Beautifully expressed.
    Great One Shot.

  10. a beautiful sign off by a wonderful supporter &contributor of One Stop….we will miss you and welcome your return…take care…pete

  11. barbara says:

    Your emotions so tenderly expressed…you can truly feel your heart in this April….bkm

  12. Beautiful and delicate absolutely lovely

  13. Love that movie, love the poem, love your blog!

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